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Kia Ora, my name is Alyzae and I am from Room 25. I really liked your writing it was really descriptive and interesting with all the wow words you put in. I still remember when I did something like this. Have you ever tried using I opened my eyes or something else like that? Give it a try it makes your writing even more fascinating. Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog http://odsalyzaeb.blogspot.co.nz/
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Kia Ora Alyzae. Thanks for your comment. A challenge that i faced when completing this task was keep looking at one slide to the other. Have you tried something like this before?
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