I really like your slide about paradise.Next time you could add a bit more information such as Words because the pictures are really cool so you could write a bit about them. When we do random Friday Writing i use slide shows to do mine and i add information with my images. Why did you chose them animals?
Hi Paradise, My name is Abby and I go to Yaldhurst Model School. I like your slide about animals or just pictures of animals. My favorite animal on that slide would be the tiger. What is your favorite out of them all? I agree with what everyone else is saying by maybe adding some words about the animals. Anyway I like your blog post.
Hi I am Gracie from yaldhurst model school. I really like your slide about animals and next time use more words about animals but other then that it is a really good blog post. From Gracie
I really love big cats because they are so wonderful and beatiful
ReplyDeleteKamusta Paradise its me Cailey and I really like tigers and baby cats maybe next time you could put mor thing that you learn in your blog
ReplyDeleteKia Ora it is Riley here from Grey Main School.
ReplyDeleteI really like your slide about paradise.Next time you could add a bit more information such as Words because the pictures are really cool so you could write a bit about them.
When we do random Friday Writing i use slide shows to do mine and i add information with my images.
Why did you chose them animals?
Because I love animals so much
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Lyric Lorenzo's friend
ReplyDeletejust saying I like big cats as well.
Hi Paradise, My name is Abby and I go to Yaldhurst Model School. I like your slide about animals or just pictures of animals. My favorite animal on that slide would be the tiger. What is your favorite out of them all? I agree with what everyone else is saying by maybe adding some words about the animals. Anyway I like your blog post.
ReplyDeleteHi I am Gracie from yaldhurst model school. I really like your slide about animals and next time use more words about animals but other then that it is a really good blog post. From Gracie
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